My first website - any comments appreciated!

check it out - www.person-all-eyes.co.uk

Slight warning - it's an adult gift website, so there is some slight nudity, but it's only page 3 type soft stuff.

Any comments on anything to do with the website would be really appreciated!

Thanks in advance.

i love the concept for your business! i'm gonna have to order some of these!

your site design... it can use a lot of work. it is very plain and boring. i think you could expand on the concept of your business and develop a style based on that. i know, it's easier said than done... but, that is why i went to school for graphic design. i would suggest trying to find a friend or professional constutant to help you work out the site design. i have a feeling that w/ a strong marketing strategy and a nice site design, your business can go far. it's new and fresh. that is why i would recommend seeking more qualified assistance (more assistance than this or any forum can provide).

good luck w/ your company!

oh, another thought... you might want to place some samples on your site. i know you have the ones on there that say "your message here" and such, but it would be really nice to see some "real world" examples of how your service may be used.

keep it up but there's only one sample

U should i think must have different things,images, angles
may be more interactive make it more customizable. U r not giving users
a option u can easily increase ur product range may mix and match.......

Idea is good but not implemented nicely i suppose

Laxy

Hi - thanks for your tips folks, really appreciated. We've put some actual samples up now of previouso rders, on the homepage. Looks quite a bit better now too.

About the general design...I appreciate your tips, but don't you think it is quite fun to navigate? I know it does need more work though, I'm just very new to this. I really don't want a 'cluttered' website though, with lots of banners and things - I'm going for the simple look I suppose.

Smart, but simple anyway! Hopefully.

Thanks again folks, and any more tips are really welcome.

Cheers.